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When you post remember you are posting to a world audience. You must use correct punctuation - sentences must start with capital letters and end with full stops, check your spelling and use writing language not text language. Mrs FR

Thursday 12 March 2015



This is a quick write i've been working on for a couple days,
hope you like it.

As she walked through the crumbling countryside, she couldn't help but wonder what had made the once beautiful countryside into this barren desert. Her cottage once covered in wild flowers was now a skeleton of what it had been. It had missing boards and broken windows, the had been door was ripped out of one of it's hinges and was now lopsided. Half of the little cottage was now in the field next door.

She packed up the belongings that were left in the cottage, and walked away there was nothing there for her now. Her mind keep on thinking what was she going to do and where was she going to end up.


This is a quick write i've been working on for a couple days,
hope you like it.

As she walked through the crumbling countryside, she couldn't help but wonder what had made the once beautiful countryside into this barren desert. Her cottage once covered in wild flowers was now a skeleton of what it had been. It had missing boards and broken windows, the had been door was ripped out of one of it's hinges and was now lopsided. Half of the little cottage was now in the field next door.

She packed up the belongings that were left in the cottage, and walked away there was nothing there for her now. Her mind keep on thinking what was she going to do and where was she going to end up.

Monday 2 March 2015

Gella Pass

Gella Pass

When you look above Gella Pass the sky is full of bright beautiful creatures called Raptors. They are the most terrifying sight, but they capture you with their colourful feathers of all different shades and brightness.Once a year when they all go to find a new feeding spot, the pass suddenly lights up like a firework show on Guy Fawkes.

It is the most beautiful sight one could ever see,
but it is the rarest thing to witness because of the thin air. hardly anyone can stand to be up that high for so long. So it is the fright of the most deadly animal being so close you could touch it and the thin air that makes it so breath taking.